Scary Setting!

It was a Stormy night, the thunder was like a bomb going off all the time. There in the maison in the middle of the forest. Almost all the trees were dead from last months Forest Fire. All the creatures looked scary because some of their skin was burned off.

Character

My character's name is Ashley and she is 11 years old. She has long black hair, blue eyes and most boys think she is pretty. She lives in America, New york. She has 1 baby brother, named Jack. Her father is dead, but mother is alive.